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So, I have to be a little harsh here. I feel with the scope of how much help you had, you could have managed to get someone to polish the English a bit. Did you only get non-English speaking people as voice actors? It doesn't look like it. Did your English speakers not bother to point out that the sentences didn't actually make sense?
The next problem you have is that the voice acting sounded a bit forced. Some of them were fine as far as the voice went, but it didn't sound natural: It sounded like someone was reading from a cue card, rather than someone who was involved in a conversation. There were uncomfortable pauses between sentences that should have flowed naturally.
Finally, the characters aren't acting the way they should. You should really take the time to understand your medium before you make something like this. Your characters simply don't ACT like the characters they're supposed to represent. The first example of this is within the first minute of the video. Cell acts like he's Frieza's best friend and is babying him and trying to make him feel better. You know those two hate each other, right?
This would be annoying, but acceptable on a small project. For the massive scale of what you've got here, it's completely unacceptable. I'm pretty sure that if you'd asked, someone would have read your script and polished out the grammar for you. I do that sort of thing for free, and most people on the site are far more charitable than me (Especially amongst the people who regularly follow the forums). What's worse, you have English speaking voice actors! Did none of them point out how wrong their lines were!? I really hope you do better in the future.

So, half your video is not a video... Rule #1 of film is "show, don't tell." The rest of it is a mildly amusing bit. This is particularly because Covid-19 only kills 3% of those affected. Honestly, I think that the beginning of the video threw me to the point that I got into analytical mode, which made me overthink the joke, and thus ruined the punchline.
PS: There are some misspellings in your text intro. Maybe use a spellchecker next time?

This is pretty well done. My only critique would be that the animation needs to be cleaned up a bit (the speech in particular is a bit choppy), and it suffers from the problem that many anime of this type have: Completely unrealistic combat. I get that she's strong and fast, but the soldiers never fire as she's beating them to death in spite of having guns drawn and aimed at her. They just kinda stand there staring as she does whatever she wants.

Actual footage of the first days of the Daddyoffive channel. Colorized.

But in serious, I like it! It's funny and relevant and the art is just quirky enough! I hope this goes somewhere!

Kinda silly. Nice little twist.

Definitely got me chuckling at the end!

Holy false equivalency, Batman! You're getting 3 stars for the animation alone, which was decent. Sadly, when you make a video, the content of that video is also a part of what is being rated, and in this case it's simply annoying. Maybe take your guilt trip to PETA. I think they like BS messages like this.

OblitusCS responds:

Hey man!!! No guilt here, just sharing some thoughts.
I´m sorry you see it that way, but ok, I respect it. Thanks for sharing and for the 3 stars!!!

Interesting concept, though I kinda feel like the next phase would be less guns and more melee. It seems that with each rendition, more homage is payed to his ability to "Rip and Tear"

Very well made. It's more incomplete than I'd like, however. I get wanting to have a cliff hanger, but this really doesn't feel like you've accomplished that. It just feels like it cut out before you could get to the meat of your story. That being said, it was still good enough that I'd be interested in seeing what's next. As such, it got four stars. If your next offering is more complete and keeps up with the quality in this one, it will receive a fifth star.

This was fantastic! I'm following and will be expecting more like this!

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