Love this content! I'm particularly happy to see that there's actually a bit of an ongoing story forming!

The animation and voice acting on these are amazing!

Made my mouth quirk up a little. The art was odd, but that seems to be a purposeful choice (you seem to have a very caricature-like art style). I do wish that Anakin would be more clear about his thoughts on sand. So wishy-washy, right?

I love that you're still working on this and keeping up steady progress.

My first gripe right off the bat is that I had to download this to play it. That might have been okay, except for all of the other problems with the game which I'll be mentioning later in the review.
Story: There doesn't appear to be much of one. MC shows up at a brothel and now... "works" there? Except the place is already being ran by the receptionist... so what is the point of your character's involvement?
Art: The art is pretty simple. Some of it is pretty well done. I thought Lola in particular was well done (this coming from someone who generally gets turned off by furry stuff). Some of it was really bad/unrecognizable as who/what it's supposed to be.
Gameplay: This is simplistic to the point that it seems completely unreasonable that the game is so large. I've seen much better flash games that loaded quickly on my old 90's era computer back when Newgrounds was new. Many of the features either don't work, or they are so buggy that if they work, there's no way to tell. An entire section of the game, the girl's rooms, is sectioned off for patreon, but the game actively gets you to spend in game currency on the upgrade in spite of the fact that nothing can happen here. I'll be honest, this was the biggest problem to me.
Audio: There isn't much, but what there is does the job, I guess. Doesn't seem like the different girls sound different, but the sound was so low that maybe I just couldn't tell the difference.

Wow... That was just awful. Sorry to be so harsh, but can this really be classified as a game with no real interactivity? The story itself is so boring and depressing.

The guitar is SO off beat! It's like they're on two separate tempos and it's REALLY grating!

I think my only gripe was that I was expecting a bit of a climax in that last 30 seconds or so. I was really feeling the story behind the music as I followed along, and expected you to maybe drop a little base or ramp things up a little as this sorcerer of legend shows his awesomeness. In spite of that, I liked it quite a bit!

So, firstly, I could totally see this in the background of some cave level of a platformer or RPG. It's got a very... Subterranean feel to it I think. Something about the echoes maybe. I don't know if I can imagine how vocals would fit on it, but I might just be listening from the wrong angle (if that makes any sense.) Other than that, I do like it!

Fantastic detail as usual!

Looks pretty good to me! Could use some color or shading, but proportions are all good and I can feel a good story radiating from this!

This is decent, but you've gotta work on your female faces. I've noticed this in other pictures you've posted as well, they tend to have heavily masculine facial features in spite of clearly belonging to female bodies (like here when you can see the rest of the anatomy on display.) In this picture specifically, I think it's the jaw that ruins it for me. It seems a bit to wide to be feminine. Anyway, good for the most part! I think you could do better based on the quality of the rest of the picture!