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Love this content! I'm particularly happy to see that there's actually a bit of an ongoing story forming!

The animation and voice acting on these are amazing!

Made my mouth quirk up a little. The art was odd, but that seems to be a purposeful choice (you seem to have a very caricature-like art style). I do wish that Anakin would be more clear about his thoughts on sand. So wishy-washy, right?

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Wow... That was just awful. Sorry to be so harsh, but can this really be classified as a game with no real interactivity? The story itself is so boring and depressing.

Recent Audio Reviews

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The guitar is SO off beat! It's like they're on two separate tempos and it's REALLY grating!

I think my only gripe was that I was expecting a bit of a climax in that last 30 seconds or so. I was really feeling the story behind the music as I followed along, and expected you to maybe drop a little base or ramp things up a little as this sorcerer of legend shows his awesomeness. In spite of that, I liked it quite a bit!

ChronoNomad responds:

I hear ya, but with stuff like this, even when I have my own ideas from the get-go, it tends to write itself. The climax for the song really begins to build at about 1:54, and it hits right around 2:20, shortly after which I start to incorporate the reprise of "Apprentice to the Arts."

In actuality, "The Sorcerer of Legend" is more about how the story continues to unfold even after the music ends. But that's the subjective nature of music: while it means one thing to me, it can be interpreted differently by the listener. And while the music has to end somewhere, just like any good tale, it continues on even once you've reached the finale.

So, firstly, I could totally see this in the background of some cave level of a platformer or RPG. It's got a very... Subterranean feel to it I think. Something about the echoes maybe. I don't know if I can imagine how vocals would fit on it, but I might just be listening from the wrong angle (if that makes any sense.) Other than that, I do like it!

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Fantastic detail as usual!

Looks pretty good to me! Could use some color or shading, but proportions are all good and I can feel a good story radiating from this!

This is decent, but you've gotta work on your female faces. I've noticed this in other pictures you've posted as well, they tend to have heavily masculine facial features in spite of clearly belonging to female bodies (like here when you can see the rest of the anatomy on display.) In this picture specifically, I think it's the jaw that ruins it for me. It seems a bit to wide to be feminine. Anyway, good for the most part! I think you could do better based on the quality of the rest of the picture!

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